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Gold - Eight Belles Rang In Heaven
Eight Belles
rang in heaven
the day of her fate,
She was called by God
to step through
his gates,
forevermore
running painlessly
in the pastures
of his land.
In a list
A contest entry
- Brevity Quickie to Honor Eight Belles by carole21.
1100 points, ended May 19, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OMG CAra, congratulations on the gold. Having been involved in thoroughbred horses and racing for most of my life, and witnessing winners being put down on the track your words brought tears to my eyes. I'm sorry I missed this one, but I was away on vacation. IT would not have compared to your creativity. Just heartbreaking and penned with love!
Much love,
Linda XOXO
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congrats on your gold ~ beautiful write
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That was very lovely and a nice tribute to the horse. Congratulations on your win. Happy trails
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Hmm... i think this was unique and interesting... wonderful pictures were painted in my mind! Very sad write though, tragic tale told... but written in a fascinating way!
Keep penning words of brilliance as you do!
~RANJI
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i hope the horse canters eternally. good luck dear niece xx
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Nice view of heaven - how the spirit moves forward...
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I really enjoyed this poem, it speaks to all who read it, great job, blessings John
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Very thought provoking and well
thought out my friend! Good luck
with this piece!
Jeremy0826 -
nice write and a sweet thought . . thanks for the contest entry . .
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Haunting
Very haunting words here. Nice job, cuz!
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