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If Tomorrow Never Came

If tomorrow never came
What would you say today?
A pause in time,
Freeze frame, rewind.
Search the depths for
That truth, unknown.
Find a reason to hold on
For you never know
What tomorrow mightn't bring.

Author notes

About time I wrote a poem based on my user name. Couple other people have told me how they've done it (based on my name) and yeah. Lol. It could be shit. Last few things I've written I've done so during major pre-exams in school. Hah. I may fail, but it's all for my art.

Meh.

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  • Ravenblood
    May 17, 2008

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    Hmmm, interesting. You love the line "Freeze frame, rewind." I've noticed you using it a couple of times. Interesting

    Not the best of your poetry, as you've stated before but still good. Keep writing darling and you wont fail. I'll alter your scores if i have to!

    Waffle you scruffles

    Claire-Anne


    • Girl With Guitar silver member
      May 18, 2008
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      I've used that line before have I? Fuck. I think I need better memory to be an original poet. Garr.
      And yeah, not the best lol. But hey.
      And oh oh shh don't tell people you'll do that! But please do WAFFLE YOU SCRUFFLES

      [This site needs the upside down smiley!]

  • bittertears
    May 17, 2008
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    I like it. It's good!

  • Maedes
    May 17, 2008

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    I will say today that I am happy for knowing you and be your friend .LOL
    Yes we have to live like tomorrow is never come, thanks for reminding


  • Lexie
    May 17, 2008

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    Like the authors note up there! I also liked the poem. Good write!

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