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Scratches on the Glass

Tears of dew
slide
in front of a sad
and pale sun
in icy glass
on which I wrote
the word "Love".

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  • isabellacohen
    June 26

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    touching

    I felt sad reading your poem. Your words invoke a sense of isolation that I can relate to.
    I feel the loss on your last line.
    Touching and poignant.

    IsabellaC

    P.S. I missed your invite yesterday.

    • Marvins
      June 30
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      thanks so much for your comment Isabella. I appreciate it for your visit.

  • james119
    May 30

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    "Tears of dew" on icy glass; "sad and pale sun" great personafication. These are powerful images. The word 'love' sliding down in the shape of tears. What a strong picture of personal loss!
    A touching poem...


    • Marvins
      June 30
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      Tanks James for your visiting and your comment.Marvin

  • Jasmine 1
    May 20
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    Beautiful imagery. Sweet sadness in a heart that loves...I can see that 'tears' sliding down.


    • Marvins
      May 30
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      Thanks for your comment Jasmine 1 . A kiss by Marvin.
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