Truly an unfamiliar sensation
I was caught in a whirlwind of a dream
The minute I reached out for your hand
And found that I had touched your heart
I was struck by a bolt of undefined energy
Was it Love? The thing that took me up into
A marvelous world of colorful sounds
Drowning in a passionate orchestra of
gently fusing fire and ice
Mighty ocean waves foam on the shore of my soul
As each word you speak touches the deep recesses of my mind and heart
You complete me
Faint memory-echoes sound in my head
And each new thing I learn about you excites me
As together, we ascend beyond all things human
And I find that this Love is immortal
Extending to eternity
Please tell me what you think
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Love
The power of true love. Never to be denied and the poet seems to find many ways to create their own idea of that love. A spendid write you have penned her poet. Of the true love shall lat forever
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Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.
~Eva
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Your poems always have such a balance of emotion and imagery, you are so wonderful with metaphors, creating such extraordinary and beautiful pieces...that are always refreshing, inspiring, and a true pleasure to read. I am certainly grateful that you share your gift, your talent, and your insight.
♥
Michele
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Wow.. didn't expect all these comments. Haha.
It was a pleasant surprise. You are always so generous with your compliments, I really appreciate that you enjoyed reading my work. ♥ hope to chat sometime soon.
~Eva
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