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Mother Nature's Mirror



She looks with disdain on her mirrored face,
the image is blurred in her eyes.
Erosion and weather leaves its deep trace,
In her heart the old mountain sighs.

Cool breezes dry tears from old sagging cheeks,
powdering her wrinkles with snow.
The sun applies rouge to colorless peaks,
highlighting with a soft warm glow.

Now pleased with the image the old girl smiles,
hugging the new day in her arms.
Her beauty now shining across the miles,
as light accentuates her charms.

As we look in the glass we might see flaws,
the rest of the world sees beauty that awes.

Author notes

This is a beautiful mirrored image of the face of the mountain.
We are our worst critics and all it takes to pick up spirits is just a compliment and a bit of face powder or a little rouge.

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  • kdom
    June 29
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    This is absolutely beautiful, every word of it!


  • individuality gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    a good formed piece with a steady beat, i was just counting then and noticing the ten to eight with the lines. ah we all like our charms saturated with light, it lifts the breath of us, so should it lift the wind of nature.


  • Legend silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    What a beautiful piece I love how you have looked at the given image and moved away from that which others will have gone with.I too try to see things though different eyes when i look at a given image.I think it works well in contests as they tend to stick in the mind once read. Excellent rhyme, flow.and imagination Good luck in the contest


  • Quiet places
    May 17, 2008

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    Excellent

    Such a beautiful message as a tribute that draws in the reader to the majesty and awe! Great poem! Don


  • toomysterious
    May 17, 2008
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    Wow! Phenomenal what you did with this prompt, awe inspiring indeed.

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