Who said she visited the grave empty-handed????,
When there were precious tears in her eyes
Floating like a wrecked ship in a stormy ocean,
Many million dreams and memories sweetest,
From childhood school-life to mid-adulthood,
Also she had prayers for him,
For his peaceful life Hereafter,
She had dismal heart with her
And some soil some dry, some wet,
And also, surely few red roses,
In order to cover the silent and steady grave,
Where lived a man, who loved her much,
And presented to her his heartiest wishes,
Wrapped in the cover of Red Roses,
Many times she thought of return the roses,
Many times she picked the pen to write,
Always she dropped, always she delayed.....
But now she returned the loan she borrowed,
Throughout her life from her loved-one,
She could not return him anything else,
But one single smile to make his day.....
Now she presents tears and prayers,
And sighs of moan, and lots of cries..
Along with fears of visiting late,
And being unable to give any smile..
But she dropped red roses on grave
Along with countless drops of tears..
She says she went empty-handed,
Though she carried many presents for him,
Including tears, wishes, memories sweet,
And wet soil with red roses...
Who said she visited the grave empty-handed????...........!!!
Please tell me what you think
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this is a very emotive poem, beautifully sculptured, it made my breath catch in my throat and my heart beat a little faster, sad, yet outstandingly beautiful
thankyou so much
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Many many thanks
Kind little Fish!
Your so soft words of encouragement have filled my heart with lots of joys!..... Thank you very much once again!
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beautifully penned... i really loved the ending... perfect!
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Many many thanks
Many many thanks respected Rosebud for your so kind words of appreciation!
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This was amazing! Very well written. Beautiful imagery and words!! Good work!
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Once again!
Thank you very much....Once again, my dear Ylova, you proved yourself very kind and loving... I am really under obligation now. Are you an Arabic young lady dear Ylova??
Have you studied my romantic story "Scream"???
Best wishes
Mujtaba
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Hey
Another great poem with deepest philosophy and sombre ideas for the loss of love. Congrtulations my love
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grief of death
oh my friend mujtaba your poem depicts very gloomy picture and pathetic end of a love story that brings tears in my eyes. your style is very powerful and impressive
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Exteremy sad
exremely sad but very beautiful poem dear Mujtaba H Zaidi
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