Inhale
Sunkissed mountains with
wispy veils of snow
Fresh pine air, like cleanliness
after a long gentle rain
Here, a place to listen, to breathe
Can you hear it, In the still silence
Can you feel it, In the cool water
Nature, free and clear,
like a soaring eagle
Mother Nature, In all her majesty
Inhale
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest 7!! by Quiet places.
600 points, ended May 19, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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just the imagery I needed to take me away from the swelter of summer
Joe
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hello again my friend,I'm sorry its been a while since my reply, I've been away for a while but thankyou for your visit and comment, as always a pleasure
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Sounds like the mountains not so far from where I live I should go there and bask in it's splendor excellent write
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Once again I thank you, you should check the picture out Its so beautiful, you are lucky to have somethin like that near you, wish I did
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ReFrEsHiNg
i was there x]
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The picture was amazin, thanks for your visit P
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Excellent
Love the message here! Great job on the imagery and emotion that draws in your reader. Don
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Thankyou for your kind comment, It was a great contest, and i got to read some amazing works
Be Well
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My
Take me there before I mely away to nothing. The beauty in your words make me wish for a better day
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Thankyou my friend
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Wow. What a refreshing poem. I like this alot. The imagery was a pleasent breath of fresh air. Thank you for sharing.
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I'm glad you like it
Thankyou for your visit
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