You have screamed at me so loudly,
I couldn’t bring the strength to cry
You have hurt me ceaselessly
Until you got what was denied
But I could never hate you
You are all I am inside
You have broken every part of me,
When hate and pain collide
You have mocked and ridiculed me,
When there was nowhere left to hide
But I could never hate you
You are all I am inside
I have never been the same,
For every memory defied,
But I could never hate you
You are all I am inside.
Author notes
Option number 4.
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Comments
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My sentiments exactly.
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i just have to say thank you for entering this. it truly almost brought tears to my eyes because of a situation i am facing now. this was professionally written. loved it. great work.
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Oh I liked this very much someone that hurt you and you still say.. you could never hate them great job!



