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an ordinary day

while someone else is having fun
some people are feeling guilty
while other people run
we stay behind with the past

as we scream from the rooftops
happy people are singing
and when the bleeding stops
they don't even know what we're doing

when one of us is depressed
we feel the same feelings
others have happy things on their way
they are always happy and gorgeous

we don't think about those things
because we're dieing inside
lost tears we have to hide
and ignoring the razor that sings

we bleed to know we're alive
but what we want is to be dead
so go on and be happy
because we always get ignored

went cutting last night, and tried to stop it while writing a poem

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  • razi
    May 27, 2008

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    very good

    i like how ur writing about sad things and the background is all happy! its a very good write. im sorry ur going threw this!


  • black-tears
    May 17, 2008
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    I guess they are, because they never thought they could get so close to something so lifethreatening
    but that's what I think about it


  • Sound of Madness
    May 17, 2008

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    Your friends should listen, instead of trying to avoid it, but hell, my friends don't even listen. I guess maybe they're afraid.

  • black-tears
    May 17, 2008
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    not a lot of my friends know it, but the friends who do know it, don´t know how to deal with it, so everytime I´m talking about it, they try not to listen, so that´s a bit annoying'


  • BloodSuckingAngel
    May 17, 2008

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    awwww this is sad and very deep ...... i kno one of my friends is trying to stop cutting and hes doing pretty good at it.....i hope you have friends there for you to get you to support u threw life and incoruage u to stop

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