In the front yard there was a skinny tree
Lit by the light from a picture window
My buddy`s girl said that she had to pee
She walked to the tree, proceeded to go
Through the window, a classic family scene
From the front seat, to say I was aghast!
Suburban front yard, used as a latrine
If she did not hurry, luck would not last
Asked if my buddy knew what this could mean
Peek from window, reputation is past
I told my buddy that she should beware
Said; "Don`t worry, she can`t hit it from there.
Author notes
As I am allowed but only twelve lines
Quatrain and Ottoma Rima fit fine.
A contest entry
- Humor in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1500 points, ended January 12, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hahahaha! Such a response says quite a bit about your buddy, not to mention his girl. This wasn't written from life, was it?
The only tech thing I need to mention is "buddies" in line 3 should be "buddy's", but otherwise this is a very enjoyable piece. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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Indeed it is
One of the funniest remarks that I can recall from my former drinking career. Thanks for the correction..Bob 42
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