SweetxDestiny....
A kind and gentle soul.
A true and well known being,
with much to offer,
much to say.
Quiet...
sweet and destined
for good things...
the path she travels is for some,
and not others...
but the depth and hints of wisdom
are easily viewed
through honest, compassionate eyes.
She may be dark,
but her soul is enlightened.
Her mind journeys through
miles of thought,
and offers
solice
for the ignorant.
Maybe I got the wrong end of the stick,
but SweetXDestiny, I reckon you're
pretty damn sick.
Author notes
You know, in the good way
Honest critique, cheers, and do tell me if I got the wrong end of the stick, or missed it entirely... ^.^ I mean, I know you, but perhaps not as well as I thought?
I do, however, know that you rock
In a list
A contest entry
- Unsigned ~ Contest for SweetXDestiny by Unsigned.
600 points, ended May 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critique Me!!! (No unecessary bashing, please.)
Comments
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lol...thanks this was great...
Simon
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aww thankyou so much
no you got the right stick
hehe
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