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Sitting on the edge of the cliff
I slowly pull my hood back and look to the sky
I place a cigarette to my lips
Pull out the lighter
Take a deep puff and hold it in
Slowly let it out while watching the stars
Roll up my sleeve

Take the knife out of its silver case

Place the blade into the flame of the lighter

Watch the blade glow bright red

I scream a name

And plunge the knife into my arm

The smell of singed skin fills the air around me

Blood pours onto the ground

Again and again i plunge it into my arm

deeper and deeper it goes

I start feeling light headed

It starts going dark

Feeling weak

I die

 

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  • Nephlim
    May 17
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    Dying's never the solution to any problem, it's just a cheap answer that gets you nowhere If you need to talk I can try to help but if you don't, that's ok too.
    But as a poem, very emotional in a way, but at the same time kind of detached, and I liked how it started trailing off at the end.
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly