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My Jellybean

The first picture was black and white
And there you were, my Jellybean
So much excitement and much more delight.

 

Jellybean so sweet,

Jellybean so tiny,

Jellybean with feet,

Jellybean with heiny.

 

Jellybean will grow,

Jellybean will move,

Jellybean will show,

Her Jellybeany groove.

 

Jellybean will dance,

And Jellybean will giggle,

Jellybean will prance,

And Jellybean will wiggle.

 

Jellybean will become a tiny little girl,

Who then will become the center of my world.

 

Jellybean will cry,

And Jellybean will whine,

Jellybean will try

To make everything be "mine".

 

Jellybean will crawl

And explore the world around.

Jellybean will fall,

But I'll pick her off the ground.

 

My Jellybean, she will always be

So sweet and precious not only to me,

But to all who have met

My Jellybean. 

 

Author notes

This poem is about my daughter Amber Lynn Nations.She's the shape of a jelly bean in her picture. I hope you enjoyed this one.

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  • PoeticDreamer
    May 26
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    I'd like to thank everyone for commenting and for the applause. God bless you all.

  • crazymomma
    May 25

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    This was sooo cute and sweet. I like the simple almost child like language used for this poem. I really enjoyed the imagery of all the things "jellybean" will do

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  • sapphireangelwings gold member
    May 25

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    This is so irrestibly cute.......the love and adoration for your daughter is clearly evident. I loved it and enjoyed it thoroughly.

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  • Bean Sidhe gold member
    May 25
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    How darling! Written with a true mother's love. Thank you for sharing.


  • Addicted to Rehab
    May 25

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    Amber is such a beauty but you already know this...I can't wait till one day her and Charlotte can play ...I mean come on Charlotte already calls Amber her baby she figures if thats Poppy's baby then its her baby to
    Sean


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    May 25

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    beautiful poem...love the cuteness and tenderness of this one blessings always ~Trisha
    Welcome to AP


  • He Is My Lighthouse
    May 23
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    This is sooooooooooooo cute... and she is a cute little Jellybean...


  • Little Feather Greeters member
    May 18

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    Welcome to allpoety

    This is so very sweet. My only suggestion is instead of using the jellybean for every line, use it just at the beginning of each stanza so that it would be:

    Jellybean will gry
    will whine
    will try
    to make everything be 'mine'

    Sometimes repitition can be overly so, so always becareful of that. I am sure your little one will be tickled to read this some day.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy
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  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    May 17

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    hee hee

    Grand daughter jellybean, she was small then but now she is getting big. She is so delightfully cute and has loads of cute hair now. Great write Julie, Dad

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