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Soul's Scrolled Role Rolls from Pole Star to Hole Jar

 

 

 

 

The darkling night's moon mirror rolls along,
spans ocean vast, casts scan on open book
whose leaves, when skimmed by those who care to look,
weave tales which surge surf merge, resurge anon.
On wine lees' seas old Homer sung so strong
dwell for a tide, while we abide, life's brook
still flows from source until fate's finger hook -
last call before forgotten fall's doom gong.
Remorse, reflections, [w]hoops of joyful song,
unanswered questions, love's sad tale forsook,
life's challenges that heedless Lethe took,
stay hid, brook neither write nor right, nor wrong.
One night, forgotten, masks more second states,
pearl moon springs pregnant strings for pearly gates.
  

 

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Moon Eugene Chan
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  • This is indeed an ihnntriguing journey of your wonderful muse..I love its immagery and its depth.,,thanks for sharing it....

  • Lily otv
    May 17

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    Before time calls time on me I hope I have done enough to fill my book with joyful and positive things so there is no need for remorse. Doubtless I will be put into my jar with many questions unanswered but then if we had the answer to everything then there would be no quest left in life to challenge us. This is an astute and interesting sonnet which invites the mind to go further than the words on the page.