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(Picture Prompt)



sometimes silent tears are the most affecting
when pain is just too deep
to express








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  • Desire gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: (Picture Prompt)
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and after reading Your words I kept seeing word: affecting
    and for some reason getting *affective* as something to look at -
    I was reading and seeing this black hole...
    looks like in concrete or a wall...
    but seeing a pasty cylindrical thing with black mass inside-
    Also for some reason seeing: Interview with a Vampire
    as if some significance~
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    silent tears
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • Florida Sunshine
    May 18, 2008

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    They do seem to roll.... "when pain is just too deep to express..." says it all.

    Good luck in the contest~