Not a ripple,
not a sway,
in the light of
this new day.
Two worlds mirror
what we find
with a love that
truly binds.
Under water,
not a sound
but of silence
can be found.
In the bright sky,
crisp clean air,
whispering winds
call us there.
When the two are
joined as one,
blended souls have
just begun.
Author notes
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest 7!! by Quiet places.
600 points, ended May 19, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on the silver! Your words are so fitting for the beautiful image, I love the idea of two mirrored worlds and mirrored souls blending as one. Excellent!
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Thank you for your lovely comment. You seem like a very sweet person. Cathy
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Outstanding
Love the flow of this emotion filled poem. Also love the conclusion! Don Oops I did yours twice! Great read again. LOL
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Thanks so much for the silver trophy, Don. And thanks for your two encouraging comments. You've made my day
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My pleasure hun! A wonderful poem! Happy to make your day! Don
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Outstanding!!
So much said with all the imagery and emotion that brings us to places like this pic. The flow of your poem was perfect. I enjoyed it! Don
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