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He Who Paints The World

Missing image

Looking at His reigning beauty.

Created for our pleasure

my sense's come alive.



Show me how to believe

take me to heights. 

 Blue hued mountains

I have climbed unsured.



With you, Lord

 steady my legs carefully.

 You hold me up as to not fall.



Father lay me in wildflowers

 colors only heaven's touched.

The Master's paint brush

 dipped with care.



Peace found in this place of holiness

 Let me always remember...



He who paints the world!

A contest entry

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    August 18
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    This was awesome.
    What a great piece to think about what the Lord is to us.

  • Xianaria gold member
    May 29
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    Congrats Baby!!!

    You go girl! I am so proud of you!!!

  • xianariaslifetime gold member
    May 29
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    Thank you

    Thank you Kelli Marie,
    I am very humbled by this silver because i wrote for the Lord. I also wrote about nature which isnt my normal. I was very suprised! Yeah!
    Again thank you sweety,

    Lifetime *hugs*

  • Kelli Marie
    May 19

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    A lovely write. Lots of wonderful imagery throughout the piece. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli

  • Xianaria gold member
    May 19

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    Beautiful :)

    My Dearest Lifetime~
    I love how you were able to paint the picture in words, offering up awe and admiration to the One who painted the original...

    Peace found in this place of holiness...

    Yes, that is what I feel as I read your words and view the scene. Very well done!

    ~ Your Xianaria
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