Its easier once I am alone
in the darkness of my mind
clinging to the night
in desperation for yesterday
So much love, I was falling
feeling the depth of emotion
The beauty of his spirit
Standing on the edge
with no one left to stop me
I am my own spirit guide...
and finally the tears are gone
Author notes
I used the word bank option,
and I used:
Desperation
Night
Tears
Guide
Love
Spirit
Depth
Feeling
Falling
Edge
Beauty
Worth
which is all of them!
A contest entry
- OPTIONS - Come and see!!!! PW ARE ALLOWED - by mystic-angel.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions folks!!! (critical reviews encouraged!!!!!!!)
Comments
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Boy-dawg went to sleep. He fooled me, he's in his own bed this time. Go figure, to use a tired phrase. Glad I came back to look. Love the relation to native American spirituality, whether you meant it that way or not. Sometimes, you go digging, you find a jewel. This was it.
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Wow! This just took my breath away. So much emotion and beautifully written. Well done on using all of the words in the wordbank. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!
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Thank you so much!!!
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