Tempting the sway,
your essence
leans...
or is it me.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie... By Lavender Butterfly. by Lavender Butterfly.
500 points, ended May 17, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now that is some good stuff there
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Excellent
What a great creation for the contest. Congrats on the gold.
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Thought provoking indeed. This could mean much to many, and as for me - I see I certain sadness. It's beautiful!
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Ooooooooooh~~
Now this is a Beauty of a piece penned and Love how You approached this prompt~
Another Magnificent piece!!
I could not help but smile
after reading this
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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beautiful & thought provoking - congrats on the gold..
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oh this is good !!!
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BRAVO!!!
Well done on this one
Wonderfully written poem
Congrat's on the Gold
Tony
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the sway ... very nice ... yeah, sometimes when i'm at a red light and the car next to me goes forward just a bit i think i'm going backwards, just for a bit and it freaks me ... your poem is very clever and yeah, who is really doin' the swayin and who is doin' the leanin' ...
really nice
Moqui
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Grats on gold!! a very lovely write.
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This is excellent, great use of 10 words! good luck...
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Lovely! Whoever leans... as long as the essence sways together it's all good right?
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So beautifully creative and softly engaging... x
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