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Into The Whole Are The Parts

Perfect synergy
everything in you
echos everything in me
You answer the call I send
in the end the answered call
forms a perfect bond of us
into our futures
shines the combined light
of us, both
you into me into us.
How can we fail?
Being the direct
duo quality content?
What are we lacking?
We already have 'us'

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  • individuality gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    i just looked at the pciture, very soft and calming scene, and your poem here reflects it well, combined light and love and faith i think of


  • Quiet places
    May 17, 2008

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    Very Creative!!

    A closer look into the mind of 2lullabyHaven!! The questions that get answers in lovers tones. Great message here! Don