Children...
Crying for attention
Will not stop...
until
We acknowledge their game
saying...
You win!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
botoh
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Crying tears bring love
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and after reading Your words I kept seeing word: Holocaust
now...I'm shown railway cars...with children in there-
but for some reason seeing one man...deciding their Fate-
seeing twins going in one direction, handicaps going in another
Sad scene-
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
We acknowledge their game
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Kids have a way of bringing around the best of us. How can you look at that face and not want to make it all better? ~ Nice job! I enjoyed the read ~ good luck my friend!
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lol... so true! Those crocodile tears sometimes just need you to relent and say you win
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