Serenity echoes
like a roaring river
keeping beat with a pulse
that was forgotten.
Emotionally battered,
heart awakens on a scream.
feeling alive again after
years of bad dreams.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest 7!! by Quiet places.
600 points, ended May 19, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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You let the picture take you deep within
And you brought out your beautiful talent
You did an exellent job on this poem
Thanks for sharing with us all.
Tony
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Oy!
Oh My this piece tugs hard and Love the images with this feeling of like a rebirth
Powerful verse You have brought to Life Hot Momma
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
Much emotion in this image filled poem. Has the fulfillment of a new awakening. Great job! Don
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