Among vegetation of shadows alive
without aurora beaming in empty visions
an indifference existing, cursing my soul,
believe nothing, not to love anybody more.
Lost hopes in absolute madness, no purpose,
anticipated heart desires from life to death
nobody even feel or matter my eternal pain
in sad discreet dens of isolated hell vagueness.
Ah, tears like of a conviction in court of love
deciding to mock the wrath of fate consolation
in carnival of life foolishness, so miserably sad.
waking the desires of mortality in alive ignorance.
A contest entry
- Stopping The Ignorance Against Depression. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended May 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF: anything under twenty lines. by checkmate.
700 points, ended May 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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in carnival of life foolishness, so miserably sad.
a haunting line there. well done here. well expressed. defintely powerful.
good job.
much lucks,
checkmate.
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Thank you for your much heartfelt and insightful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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