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pen to paper or razor to skin...

pen to paper,
or razor to skin?
which one works best,
to relive the pain within?

Do i want to see blood?
or do i want to see ink?
must make a decision,
but too depressed to think..

My therapist said pen to paper,
my mum said pain i must share,
my friends said to always call them,
and dad.. well he doesn't even care!!!

but neither of these work,
to relieve the pain,
for i always relive it,
when i close my eyes again...

your not even here,
but I still feel your fists,
never hated before,
but now i can't hate enough!!!!

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  • MYsecondchance
    May 30, 2008
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    this is pretty good thanx for entering my contest


  • vampireprincess
    May 21, 2008

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    This is good. Yeah it's what I go through all the time.. but you already knew that. I like the poem it's sad.


  • Sound of Madness
    May 17, 2008

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    WOW, yeah, this is an argument that many of us go through every day. This sounds alot like me, except I don't have a theripist.


  • peregrin
    May 17, 2008
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    I love this, so much. I go through that argument with myself every day.