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Sunburn

Summer's unbearable heat
Beats down on my naked back
Setting my raw flesh ablaze
With strawberry infused flames

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  • Nam
    June 8
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    A nice poem that you have written here.

    -Nam

  • Piccola gold member
    May 18

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    now that we have three digit numbers when they announce the temperature, this is very visual for me. thank you for entering.