Last night I found myself thinking about you
while I was sitting at home alone
and I didn't know what to make of it
I wasn't sure what to make of you
but I knew you made me uncomfortable
and you made me unsure
and you made me blush
but in a good way
and I don't know what you'll make of that
or of me, I guess,
but I hope you'll make something of it
because I'm coming to like the uncertainty
and the questioning, and the tip-tip-toeing
of your feet padding across the floor
when it's dark and I can't see you
but I know you're getting closer
and I know that you'll be stopping soon
and I know that you'll be here
Last night I found myself thinking about you
while I was sitting at home alone
and I didn't know what to make of it
or of you, or of us, the both of us, together
A contest entry
- rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think. honestly.
Comments
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i like the sound of this...very nice and loving and mysterious!
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mmmm intriguing is the word that strikes me. I like it.
~cheers
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