Onyx eyes look over a deserted plain
Devoid of all emotion
Ashen wings sit behind their owner
Diffusing in an upward motion
Angels assassinated by bittersweet emotion
The only one left, stuck in the yore
Watching the demise of her brethren
Sunset has an intriguing lure
Ashen wings take their first escape
On their immoderate flight
Sweet roses perish as they pass by
Retching at the young angels inner light
Onyx eyes hazing over as if possessed
By a strange, yet reassuring sensation
Augmenting their walls to astounding heights
Absent of any desolation
Crimson tears run ice-cold from onyx eyes
Greying thoughts mingle in her mind
Her common sense being torn asunder
Objects are now undefined
Angels assassinated by bittersweet emotion
The only one left, stuck in the yore
Watching the demise of her brethren
Sunrise has an intriguing lure
What did you think
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WOW!
Amazing!
You have definatley NOT lost your touch!
I'm going to have to go back and read the original poem to compare. But of course Both are just Great!
Love it!
I may not know the Exact definitions of all those very awesome words, but i definately get the jist.
Lovely!♥
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Well thank you much! The only things I changed were spelling mistakes and I deleted a couple of repeating stanzas. That's all thank you again anyway!
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Manda, i really liked that. Because i am at loss with poetry, i had no idea what i meant. BUT it was beautiful. hahah
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Well, I'm glad you liked it. Now I have to write my speech for tomorrow. Bleh!
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