This is a poem about rage
about confusion and frustration.
The froth of an angry sea
Swirling deep within.
A burn that is deep in the heart
forcing one to tremble.
One can kill many times
When possessed by such a tempest.
From such chaos demons are spawned
Like countless guppies
from the mother of hate.
Is there a cure for pain like this?
What acts could be pointed out
that would identify
the cause of such fury?
Is there water holy enough
to wash away the scars
produced by darker passion
in one man such as me?
In a list
A contest entry
- ♥MY CRAZY FAMILY!!!!♥ by Rianna Bear.
600 points, ended May 30, 21 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Powerful
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just writing this down so i don't forget...when i come back next time to add you onto my page
my "distant cousin lumber jack super hero!"
-that's awesome. love it!
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this was intense and extremly dark in anger. well done...only, are you wanting to be part of my crazy family??
thanks for your entry!
*rianna
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"From such chaos demons are spawned/Like countless guppies/from the mother of hate" - WOW. "Is there water holy enough to wash away the scars" - WOW. It takes a powerful pen to articulate angst such as this. We all have dark nights of the soul; not all can express it so powerfully.
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