I speak...
nothing is heard
Scream...
silence echoes
No response,
none expected
You quit listening
Author notes
[Lyrics Line Prompt]
Your Prompt is: Lyrics Line Below
What have I got to do to be heard-
Love you Tory.
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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2 words....too late....
What world do we live in that these things still go on....simply dispicable truths. Your words cold, your poem stark, your picture prominent. Well done and good luck for the contest.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: You quit listening
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and after reading Your words I kept hearing like a mocking of sort~
if that makes sense...like hearing: blah blah blah...
not necessarily saying You do this but getting that in connection to the verse-
like showing me a person doing that-
Kept hearing word: Irritated like a reference to someone not listening to what is said...Irritating especially when the other person can talk and talk and talk without care given to time eaten up
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...You quit listening
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Hey you ~ long time no see ~ ~ I like the way you layed this out and your usage of the words can be read ~ I'm not sure if you did it on purpose or accidentally but you can read it down each side and it makes a statement, or as whole and it makes a statement. Good job all the way... GL in the contest ~ Glad to see you still penning! I've missed you!
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Well done on getting it done.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Passionspromise
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