The farm by the river is so much fun
With its animals food and warm sun
With the goats so many, too many to count!
Look at all the babies running about!
Look at Goober and Gomer and Sisco jump!
Watch the triplets land with a thump!
Oh poor Matilda and Gazzel and Loop
Dealing with this naughty little group.
Look at those two donkeys!
The baby Trouble and the mother Monkey!
Look at the stallion
With his well earned medallions
Watching his two mares
Watching with lovable care
Dehlilah the paint
The beautiful saint
And perfect little Belle
Whom we could never sell.
All of my wonderful pets by the river
The beauties that make the children quiver
With utter excitement and glee
Oh how they wish they could all have pets like me!
A contest entry
- The Funny Farm by DrunkenRam.
850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me something CARAZY!!!! by WatchingStars.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheer Up My Daughter. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended May 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all BEST poems you have!!!!~ by SmartBrick.
320 points, ended May 29, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Get The Gold for a pre-write by piccola.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest and if it sucks, say it sucks.
Comments
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This is really cute!! I am sooooo an animal lover!
I have goats too!! Another thing in common perhaps lol.
Simply loved it!
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my friend and neighbor has goats. We're expecting some new ones any day now. They sure are fun. thanks for the entry and the fun read.
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I LOVE ANIMALS!SOOOOOOOOO MUCH IT'S CRAZY!I
this poem with all my ♥!Good luck!~
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So much fun you have at your farm.
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Thank you for your cute entry, good luck in our contest, Josie & Kiarna
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how is that not random?
sounds pretty freaking random to me i liked it, it was cute
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thats pretty good. not as random as i would have liked, but im assuming this is a prewrite so it wasnt intentionally random, but meant to tell a story. as a regular poem i really liked this tho....
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This sounds like a nice place to live, except when feeding time comes around, hehe.
nice mental picture painted here, serene yet activity lurks, I like it, thanks for entering my little contest, good luck.
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I wish I could have all those pets. It sounds like so much fun. This is a really cute poem and well written especially considering you age
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