In night’s cold desperation
The tears guide you
Through the tangled dreams
You stand upon the edge
Consciousness drifting out,
Pulling you back
You are flinging, feeling, falling,
Falling forward
Towards a ground worth landing
Between the dream and reality
Catch yourself within its depths
There you will find
The answer worth seeking
Author notes
option 3:
Desperation
Night
Tears
Guide
Depth
Feeling
Falling
Edge
Worth
A contest entry
- OPTIONS - Come and see!!!! PW ARE ALLOWED - by mystic-angel.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
let me know what you think
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Mystic
haha forget the wordbank this is awesome weather or not you followed the rules, My imagination brought me to a wiseman giving a complicated riddle as the answer to your reacurring dreams. Very well done!
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thanks.
i like your imagination. that would be a great ending.
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cool! you used the word bank very well.
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thanks goldilocks
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I like this, a good use of the wordbank. Good emotion and flow, Well written. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!
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