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Envy Is The Ulcer Of The Soul

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E liminating species by our careless disregard
N ever concerned as we leave behind abraded marks our scars
V arious pockets of emptiness we ignore
Y outhful destruction of all that lay at our shore.

I ntricate designs and patterns with natural laws
S ystematically by interpretation of Oz.

T his earth will provide in abundance
H ither to with eternity’s dance.
E ach of us learning to take a chance~

U nderstanding in acknowledgement of a destiny
L it by the power and glow of blue to infinity.
C ounter balance Polaris all aspects of living
E ntering and exiting our allotted time of giving.
R ender forth all you have so there is enough for all ...

O rder the chaos before we stop turning and fall.
F orget the physical addictions that make us crawl

T hrough desolation, that buries a part of the soul
H anding over honor and integrity as the toll.
E nter, cross over the threshold of empowerment ...

S editiously confront those who choose enslavement
O f our freedom, liberty and personal choice.
U phold your own decisions with confident voice.
L ose “Self” in the cosmos, perfect love and perfect trust.

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Envy is the ulcer of the soul - Socrates

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  • mystic-angel gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Wow! I love this, an amazing acrostic, brilliant flow and a well written. Deep and true. Well done. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!


    • DragonBlue gold member
      May 18, 2008
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      Thank you. Your title was definately the inspiration.

      Blessed Be~
      )O(
      DragonBlue


  • crazymomma
    May 16, 2008

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    I really like a good acrostic. This seems so well written I hardly noticed it was one because it flowed so well I got sucked in


    • DragonBlue gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your input and rabbit ears.

      Blessed Be~
      )O(
      DragonBlue