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Once In a Blue Moon







As she comes to me once in a deep blue moon
I feel the excitement welling up within.
Her body sways like a song in perfect tune.

For love I become as crazy as a loon
I lust for her and don’t care if it’s a sin
As she comes to me once in a deep blue moon

I am as clumsy as an oafish buffoon
but she opens my heart with a toothy grin.
Her body sways like a song in perfect tune

With a voice singing like no other can croon.
She invites me to waltz, in this night we spin.
As she comes to me once in a deep blue moon.

I am floating as high as a hot air balloon.
We don’t care where we’re going or where we’ve been.
Her body sways like a song in perfect tune

Sensual  love is like a berry on a spoon
We are going places lust has never been..
As she comes to me once in a deep blue moon
Her body sways like a song in perfect tune.


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  • Pretani gold member
    May 17

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    Hi Jeff,

    You've certainly given me some love here ha ha! This feels like a song to me. I can see someone sitting with a guitar and singing this.

    Thanks for the entry. Best of luck!

    Heath


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    May 16

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    This is a most wonderful vinaelle I have read in a long time, it is just perfected the words aw makes one wish it was them, you write of. It truly is beautiful!


  • Selithia
    May 16

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    Man,This was beautiful. The words flow together perfectly. I really enjoyed reading it,and i really hope to read more from you soon,
    -selithia