Vegetables are good for you,
and you do need cheese and bread;
but you probably hate tomatoes,
and broccoli makes you see red.
Perhaps you don't like spinach,
or lima beans, or peas,
and think collie flower's awful,
while carrots make you sneeze.
Well, there's an alternative,
which will keep you fed.
Forget those yucky vegetables.
Order pizza instead.
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 2 Children's - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended June 3, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think, unless you are a total idiot. If so, keep it to yourself.
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You may have done better but I don't like Pizza!
another firm favourite with the group of expert judges and firmly into the HMs
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You don't like pizza ...
that's unAmerican. Oh, wait, you're not an American. Hmmmmmm ....
Anyway, thanks.
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This is a cute write with a rice rhyme scheme.
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This is cute ...
did you realize you said a "rice rhyme scheme"?
Reminds me of a site I need to get back to:
www.freerice.com/
You go there and pick the meanings of words. Each time you get a word right, it donates 20 grains of rice to the hungry.
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Shel would be proud! I rather like my veggies personally, and oddly enough, usually detest them on pizza. But, the sauce counts, doesn't it? Unless one remembers that tomatoes are actually a fruit . . .
Of rhyme and flow, this has plenty (pardon the inversion 
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Hell man,i love vegetables. But pizzas good too. amusing write,great job.
-Selithia
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But you're not ...
a kid.
A lot of kids hate vegetables. I certainly did.
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