What marks serenity
so clearly above all
is the silence
whispering the absence
of crying.
Author notes
picture prompt
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful as you always are dear!!!!!!
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So sad we have to even be aware of what your issues here deal with...where are the consciences spirits and souls of those who commit such crimes...God bless such broken souls. You capture the heart of this contest in my opinion.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Peace Blessed
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and after reading Your words I kept seeing the words:
death comes on swift winds
for some reason...so I read again and was seeing scenes from The Mummy
Nudged to mention scarab- beetle; Imhotep
I kept getting Archeology each time I read...was getting reference to unearthing treasure
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
whispering the absence of crying
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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It's not always what is said, as crying speaks to us all. Nice job ~ Good luck in the contest!
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tks for your comments
What I noted particularly about the pics was that the faces implied different kinds of cries, which led to why 'we' cry, and then to when we don't
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Brevity.
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merci merci
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