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the day i cracked the head of dawn

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i was born between the legs of septimus

my mother caught me,
used her set of stellar hands,
baptized under the name of virgoan,
educated me with templed words,

and lately
i found myself asking where to find
a maiden named solace.












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Author notes

September is the ninth month of the year in the Gregorian Calendar and one of four Gregorian months with 30 days.

In Latin, septem means "seven" and septimus means "seventh"; September was in fact the seventh month of the Roman calendar until 153 BC.

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  • Nicolette gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Lovely poetry, and a very creative take on the prompt. The last line is so wonderful... i think many of us have asked that very same question. I really liked this.

    Beautiful.

    ~ Nicolette


  • tara wilson gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Love this...a beautiful poem...


    (catched - caught)