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10 p.m

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we counted each star
in the violet sky; sharing a smile

for each inky dream.

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& when winter came,
your eyes were brighter than

murky black, lighter than
soft lavender;

they were the same color
as the violet skies- exploded.

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& as your iris danced-
I knew you were my world,

my violet sky.

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Author notes

checkmate

cat got fried

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PROMPT: indigo
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Comments


  • Amaranthine Lover silver member
    July 30
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    This is beautiful and simple!

  • Beauty Of Silence
    May 21

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    WOW!

    Dear gal, I absolutely love this piece, wholeheartedly! Trust me, i think this was simply wonderful! it was such a pleasure to read this amazing poems with such gorgeous description!

    Buddy, this gave such a warm feeling and brought such comfort! Absolute brilliance! And dude, the violet sky... gal, i think i know where you got that from! Kays kiddin! CHILL ALREADY!

    This is perfection staring straight at me! Keep writing such wonderful poems kay! OH! i just got confused a teeensy weensy bit tho... WHAT THE HELL DOES THE TITTLE HAVE TO DO WITH THIS POEM??? Other than that, rock on!

    Luv u 4eva!
    ~Ranji


  • transit
    May 20

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    ooo

    I love the imagery and the sweet feeling from this poem. The flow was smooth and it read like a dream which is so real.

    I think I know whom this is about. It is such a soft read that it is perfect for a day when nothing is going right. Maybe you can come up with something. Beat of luck in the contest!

    loveees,
    transit~