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we counted each star
in the violet sky; sharing a smile
for each inky dream.
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& when winter came,
your eyes were brighter than
murky black, lighter than
soft lavender;
they were the same color
as the violet skies- exploded.
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& as your iris danced-
I knew you were my world,
my violet sky.
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Author notes
checkmate
cat got fried
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PROMPT: indigo
http://pboi666.deviantart.com/art/Indigo-75008833
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompts A - Z by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended July 30, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful and simple!
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WOW!
Dear gal, I absolutely love this piece, wholeheartedly! Trust me, i think this was simply wonderful! it was such a pleasure to read this amazing poems with such gorgeous description!
Buddy, this gave such a warm feeling and brought such comfort! Absolute brilliance! And dude, the violet sky... gal, i think i know where you got that from!
Kays kiddin! CHILL ALREADY!
This is perfection staring straight at me! Keep writing such wonderful poems kay! OH! i just got confused a teeensy weensy bit tho... WHAT THE HELL DOES THE TITTLE HAVE TO DO WITH THIS POEM???
Other than that, rock on!
Luv u 4eva!
~Ranji
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I love the imagery and the sweet feeling from this poem. The flow was smooth and it read like a dream which is so real.
I think I know whom this is about.
It is such a soft read that it is perfect for a day when nothing is going right. 
Maybe you can come up with something. Beat of luck in the contest!
loveees,
transit~
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