broken heart
wounded spirit
hopeless
empty
volumes spoken
in the silent
language of a suicide
Author notes
user name is Robin; i used option 4
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - September is Suicide Awerness and Pervention Month by FallenFromGrace1102.
2620 points, ended October 3, 2008, 70 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice.
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As Bee said, this was short; but said so much in that tiny space. Bravo; you chose your words well!
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Beautiful write. i really loved it. keep up the awesome work. i wish you the best of luck in my contest. and thank you for entering this piece. it wasn't long and their wasn't much words but it said so much.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: death speaks in silence
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and after reading Your words I kept seeing the word: Internet
and the face of the 13 year old girl who committed suicide after receiving harassing-brutal messages from a mother who pretended to be a boy close to her age-
I kept hearing word: Wisconsin...
also reference to The Lone Star State for some reason
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
language of a suicide
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Nice free write ~ GL in the contest! -
(/I just can't help but to tell you the last line you mis-spelt: Language. Hope you getting it fix before the judging.)
Still nice job with word placement on the write! I enjoyed it! -
Darkly beautiful and sad... Such a forlorn write... I hear you...
K
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