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A Fire Inside

Miss Murder
Endlessly, she said
The great disappointment
Dancing through Sunday
This time imperfect

The leaving song:
Reivers' music

The killing lights
Kiss and control
This celluloid drema
Carcinogen crush

Silver and cold
Bleed black
Love like winter
Totalimmortal

The days of the phoenix
Halloween
Paper airplanes (makeshift wings)
37mm
The leaving song, pt. 2.

Author notes

These are titles from songs by the band AFI, put into a song. Some of it doesn't make sense, but whatever.

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  • Selithia
    May 16, 2008

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    AFI fuckin rocks, and i found this interesting. As for poem wise,its always good to use your own originality,but this turned out to be a pleasant use of someon elses. Great write and i hope to read more from you.
    -Selithia