He didn't stop.
You didn't
protect me.
Where were you
as he crept in?
No......
Author notes
Photo Pormpt; photobucket.
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hey!
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Gut turning...vividly so...
Good luck!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Mommy
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several
times and I kept seeing the little girls- Baby Grace
and JonBenet~
Also the mothers from the polygamist compound on trial currently~ Hearing words: this happens more often then we know of
Sadly
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
You didn't protect me.
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Very painful, and so sad, how hard it is to feel this way, to suffer the hell...
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I HATE Pediphiles ~ Questions touching. GL in the contest!
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Not about to look at the pix as I get chills from the poem. Well written but I don't like the sound of it.
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Well done...
Very expressive and extremely well written.
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oh wow i got chills. well done!
Mylee
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