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The Bishop's Tale

The Bishop, his eye on pomp,
Tripped over circumstance
And fell on his profundament.

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  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 19, 2008
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    I like the play on words in the first two lines, but I have a question about the word "profundament". Forgive my ignorance, but I'll need some clarification, because it appears to be a foreign word, and I can find no definitive meaning for it. Thanks so much for entering my contest!


    • Falstaff
      May 21, 2008
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      Thanks

      It'just a silly enjambment of "profound" and "fundament" to go along with the basic silliness of the piece. It could freely be defined as "self-important ass."

      • RatherImaginative silver member
        May 21, 2008
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        Ah, yes! In that case, I can see it working very well indeed, and the picture painted becomes clear. Thanks!