these little children have been hurt and scarred
because their angels let down their guard
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how did this poem make you feel? how was it good/bad?
Comments
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Sadly there is always the tug of a good and evil world...no one can ever be there for someone totally 24 x 7, no matter how much we want or try. One day those crimes will be made accountable for...so much more than man could ever do...in the meantime we must pray for such broken souls. Captured well!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: these little children
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and the message radiated like a beacon...
I kept hearing: You are right-
I'm seeing that commercial I believe for a credit card where the Guardian Angel was not paying attention and the cardholder was getting hurt-
encountering accidents...it was meant to be humorous this commercial which it was but in reality...when it comes to Life- Human-Creature
the stakes are much higher and it is no longer a joke...
Strange as it may sound...right when I was about to post this...I was hearing the word: Celtics
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...their angels let down their guard
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Sometimes we feel that way. Like pain is caused by the lack of protection. GL in the contest!
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