Remember being happy and loved?
Remember life?
Not lately.
I didn't understand how you could just stand there,
unobservant to my pain;
when i withered in it,
did you think it was you?
You were locked in your happy world;
I was in my dark world.
I can't understand how you didn't notice,
I can't think of any reasons why not,
but you see yellow, don't you?
Your ignorrance hurts;
to think i love you so and you don't notice me.
My pain is only minor...
not noticed in your yellow world.
I notice your pain.
You don't notice mine.
Why, when you don't have any pain?
Why don't you notice me?
A contest entry
- Stopping The Ignorance Against Depression. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended May 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can anybody relate?
Comments
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Thank you for your much heartfelt and insightful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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