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Short Verse



I treasure
these little gestures

these things I feel
and write

not only;
imaginations

but the soul of me,
in flight



Author notes

This may not be something you desired,
but in honor of a great poet; Robert Browning, I have written
a few words about poetry, we write.

A contest entry

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  • ecrivain01
    May 20, 2008

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    I have so many really good entries ...

    in this contest, which is unfortunate for you, as this might have done much better in the judging if that were not the case.

    Thanks for entering in any case.


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    This is lovely.... I loved the voice here; it has a ring of sincerity about it... We can only write from the true pulse, and each small poem is a diary. Well done, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    I do like this too - flow, and the rhyme of these few lines. Enjoyed reading this one. Even the host likes it, even if it wasn't what was required.

  • ecrivain01
    May 16, 2008
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    You're right ...

    however, I think you've done a credible job anyway.

    Thanks for entering.


    • Malabu
      May 17, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting...you are welcome to remove it if you like...I would not be upset if you do...
      Mal

      • ecrivain01
        May 17, 2008
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        I see ...

        no reason to remove it. There's nothing wrong with it.

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