Keep it in mind
That I'm only to young
And probably to old
Seventeen years doesn't make me a fool
It probably does make me too foolish inside
Because only someone with a twitch in their eye
Can really distinguish between the fairy tale ending
Of what we called Disney book love
From the real deal
The golden age anniversaries
Of fifty years of bliss
So when you think about kissing these lips
Just remember do you really want to
Involve yourself with someone you might just end up laying in bed with?
Or do you really want to have an relationship
A relationship?
A ten letter word that can make a little boy
Become a man or simple stay in their child-like motives
Because I know kissing can lead to a mill of things
Either Friday night hookups
Or Saturday sessions with my pillow and tears
Hey maybe there’s a chance of your teardrops being wasted on me
But we all know what is really going to happen
I’m not gonna sweat because I know the philosophy of a fool
This is the philosophy of the Foolosophy
The Love Foolosophy
Just because I can’t find love
Doesn’t mean it does not exist
A heart to young
But a soul to old
I’m trapped in-between the whimsy
And the reality of real
Author notes
I snagged the title from the song "Love Foolosophy" by Jamiroquai. Please if you guys want check out this bands work. Jay Kay (lead singer) has an awesome voice. As soon as you hear this song you will want to get up and dance! No matter what type of music you are into….Jazz…Hip Hop…or Emo/Screamo…you won’t be able to stop yourself from tapping your feet.
Any advice would be lovely?
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Jamiroquai is a great artist!!! That's throwin' it back wicked man long time ago!!!! I can sit here for hours and just read the words that tumble off the page and seep into my head with a beat and make me think!!!! You almost have a Nas vibe. Blunt, but a topic that makes you say " whoa wtf"
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Thanks so much...I am such a huge fan of Jamiroquai...Jay kay is a genius, I simply adore him.
Wow thats sweet if you...Nas? I wish I think he's one of the best rappers alive...period.
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Sis this is just beautiful without a doubt,I think you have done a marvellous job here and a great job of highlighting the fact that guys can get hurt too and that they are only human too
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Lovely!
Very beautifula dn quite honest. I lieks the lines:
Either Friday night hookups
Or Saturday sessions with my pillow and tears
Hey maybe there’s a chance of your teardrops being wasted on me
Really make me feel how you do even tho it's from a guys stand point and that's not so easy to do. Great write. And love the authors too by the way! haha
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Thank you so much
I wanted this poem to be sorta universal b/c I know girls are not the only one who can get hurt in these type of situtions...because guys can get hurt as well [even if they won't admit it] because I know some girls who can be so damn mean. haha
But yeah I added the authors notes because some people are so closeminded...plus I'm not a fan of the emo/screamo stuff
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