Trapped emotions in this cage of wood
Why you did this to me i never understood
So as i leave i take one last look
From the outside as you swing on that hook
Author notes
credit photo; The Dark Age is coming. Jesiel
A contest entry
- Dark Pic Prompt... Semi Quickie.. PIF.... come see... by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 17, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good powerful piece, the poem goes with emotional grain of the photograph, with dark emotional aspects. in this crazy world there are many actions that are not understood.
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Ohhh did you hang them?
Amazing what another can do to our emotions isn't it!! Brill take on the pic!
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I really enjoyed this. Good imagery and rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest
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taiinfinite
thanks for your comment, first time i did a rhyme
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