I heard her teardrop hit my soul
before I knew she was crying
somewhere within...
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A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So often the eyes of the soul cry out and tell a story without tear or word...why don't more people see these signs and act accordingly. Sadly by the time many do its too late. Captured scenes well!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Weeping willow
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and kept getting the same word: Painful
I was being shown a slew of images from children in foster care who were in dire need- they were neglected by the Host parents but neglected in a manner of doing it for the money, not to make a difference.
For some reason hearing word: Florida- couple
on the tv...I am seeing-
as if looking at the tv-
Reference to *rare cases* but many undocumentated ones...never get reported.
Now Hearing: You have a Heart of Gold...
like wanting to scoop these children up and open up some type of daycare-
the feeling that comes through- I'm hearing: that is Doable~
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
I heard her teardrop hit my soul
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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"I heard her teardrop hit my soul" So many times when we think about how the pain evokes the passion within ourselves. Good luck in the contest!
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The idea of "hearing" a teardrop is terribly unique...nice job. The use of the word 'within' always has an air of mystique about it when used in the right way, which of course you did.
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I think mothers do that often... mine still does even now...
I also am usually able to hear someone's tears before they show...
This really is wonderful!
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cool
good luck in the contest
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