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Reflection


Unbeknown the rage that twisted
like the wind in your heart

I became a prisoner of pain;
captured in my own
fortress of love






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Credit artist: The Dark Age Is Coming by jesiel

http://jesiel.deviantart.com/art/Arkhee-The-dark-age-is-coming-4258307

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  • Peteskid gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    very expressive reflecting so many things about a relationship where one person seems to be held by the affectin they wish to give...thoughtful...well done...PK


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Ahh yes... I have been in a relationship just like that!! Wonderfully expressed here! The imagery captures the feeling so well!
    Thanks


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 16, 2008

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    this is a really touching piece to..jeje

    I really like your poems!

    ♥♥♥♥


  • crimsondew
    May 16, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery....
    Unbeknown the rage that twisted
    like the wind in your heart

    love those lines...All the best!


  • poppa
    May 16, 2008

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    Wonderful write to the prompt...physical pain can be nothing compared to heartache...well written....wish you luck in your contest..

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