Stripped, abused and tortured.
Help me, my life's but one -
Don't let it slip away!
Author notes
Picture prompts - 15 words so the picture or lyrics line makes you feel....
A contest entry
- - Speak from Spirit in 15 Words - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Don't let it slip away!
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times and kept seeing birds in the sky...
but getting reference to PETA...like freeing the caged birds-setting them free- they look like pigeons
yet getting word: England....and what sounds like Bershire and hearing another reference to like Cinderella...
Life like Cinderella
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Don't let it slip away
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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"Help me, my life's but one -" Great words and so true! Nice job good luck in the contest.
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you have done well with the prompt , powerful poem xx good luck sis
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Good emotion in this, very well done with the amount of words you have used.
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I wish I could see the picture prompt here. It is a powerful poem. Too bad we aren't all cats with 9 lives lol. Good poem. Thanks for sharing
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