Spanish test on Tuesday,
History on Wednesday,
Trig on Thursday,
Will it ever end?
I lost my notes,
my report isn't started,
I'm in detention,
and my priviliges just departed.
Got an 81 on my English paper,
red marks all over it,
Flunked my science quiz,
Didn't study, I admit.
Lunch is just digusting,
my jacket's been stolen again,
While running down the halls,
Got busted by a patrolman.
So here ends my story
I hope you have seen,
I'm much too young for this,
at the tender young age of 15.
A contest entry
- #12 PIF CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
600 points, ended May 26, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Entertaining and cute story in a poem.
Well done! Typo: "priviliges" should be "privileges".
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oh wow, this was great! hehe i loved the last part too. it was lighthearted and enjoyable well done! i loved it very very very much i say(:
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When I read your title, I was reminded of this song by Bowling for Soup called "High School Never Ends".
There's an error I spotted though: 2nd stanza, you spelt "detention" as "dentntion".
Other than that, I loved the rhyme
Best of luck hon
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